Excellent work Lucas. Your writing is exciting, I enjoyed the suspense you created. Using describing words like 'creatures of fear' and asking the reader if they would enter the deep waters. I got shivers reading about the sharks beginning to surround you! So scary!
Excellent work Lucas. Your writing is exciting, I enjoyed the suspense you created. Using describing words like 'creatures of fear' and asking the reader if they would enter the deep waters. I got shivers reading about the sharks beginning to surround you! So scary!
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